short fuse!

short fuse!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Short the fuse that lit
The bomb that shook the room, loud
Explosion of words.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Wow....

Short the poem that stirred
the divine muse whose words, loud
explosion of emotions in verse

Posted 9 Years Ago


i`m sure this write is not about you ??

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

lol ....... Bossy!!
 wordman

9 Years Ago

has to be a woman involved,lol
andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

no...... lol
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Gee
Ah,now the master of many genres.....Cricket,337-1,boo,boo,boo,I can see a draw,hopefully,looming(please Lord)Hope you are well Andrew

Posted 9 Years Ago


Gee

9 Years Ago

Or me.......belly bouncing and the old chap creating a furrow a,it trails behind me as I Sprint up a.. read more
andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

No Gee I also want entertainment lol You just sit home in front of your telly!:)
Gee

9 Years Ago

Tut,ok then....
Ha you found that illusive thought in this crisp little grenade of a senyru Andrew.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

bang bang john thank you for dropping in my friend. much appreciated!
I like this one and it all explains itself. I am no good at writing these. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Kathie, They are fun to write FT Ledgrew is the master
it is sad when someone just cannot keep from exploding with those expletives and demeaning words...

and there really is no reason for that fuse to be lit...

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you J
~The residual effects can be felt for years in that kind of aftermath. The parallels between these two are an excellent little analogy. ~

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Relic, Good to see you are hanging around and doing Troll watch lol!
oh, sounds like a bad temper... wouldn't want to be caught in the middle of that one...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 15, 2015
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andrew mitchell

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