How do you like your messages?

My thoughts vibrate

On corrugated roads

Of dust and dirt, rising.

Travelling through clouds

Of slumber, on the wings

Of an eagle, falling.

Flowing down the pen

Onto paper, sealed. 

On the wheels of time

Motorized, carried

By mechanical birds

To your door, the letter.

In the new modern  age

Hammered are the thoughts

On keyboard letters

Forming words that flutter

On the wings

Of technology;

Sent.

How do you like your Messages?

Sent on send?

Or in time,  with travel?

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

I prefer the long hand of letters, the dying art of stationery paper with matching envelopes. Of course, it's a lost art, just like buying cards in retail, and actually mailing them!

I like your reference to "mechanical birds"..."forming words that flutter". Very clever, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for the nice review. I like snail mail lol

[ANTO]

I'll take the email please with chips. I could never go back to that snail mail - unless it was for the right person... ;)
Good one Andrew - especially liked "...Forming words that flutter on the wings of technology " - class !

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you wise one!

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your message is loud and clear, Andrew... another creative write leaving us with food for thought...

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks for your kind words FT

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always Andrew you find a subject and create a descriptive narrative which leaves us thinking. Get the message?

[andrew mitchell]

LOL..... thanks Matey up North!

[Gee]

Oily with extras!!!!!!oh messages...another fine write from underneath the world

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Gee How are you going up there lol Getting a massage I bet and a happy.....!

[Gee]

Lol,all is well thanks,catching a breather whilst work is quiet

[andrew mitchell]

I've just finished one more day to go ugh!