Manipulated

A Poem by andrew mitchell

A puppet I am

When she pulls my heart strings hard

dangling my love, used.

© 2015 andrew mitchell

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Jamestown

Few words that speak loud!
Short, sweet, and to the point,
Well penned:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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oh, I see you have become the marionette :D... been there, my friend.. nice senryu!.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words FT a fellow muscat!

John Alexander McFadyen

Mmmmmm! Get the point Andrew. However the second line is six syllables and the last line................ouch. Maybe 'I am left dangling or 'I jump to her tune' ?

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on June 20, 2015
Last Updated on June 20, 2015

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andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia

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