No swan lake

No swan lake

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The piano plays
Drowning notes in tears. No swan
In a lake deep blues.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Very nice Haiku :) ... and good choice of words. The message was very clear and definitely reflected loneliness and pain.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Aaah ! You are so right Guy Thank you for dropping by and G'day
guy drori

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :) hope you have a great day :)
Ray Charles, Baby, all the way,... play it again, my friend... nice senryu... love those Deep Blues!

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

lol Thank you FT
I have never been a fan of ballet nor opera for that matter. Shows how unsophisticated I can be. But like most I have seen this scene many a time but I thought it did have the swan in it lol?

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Not into opera either John. cheers
I love listening to the piano, even when it is playing the blues. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Valentine

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Added on June 16, 2015
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