Who did it?

Who drank my coffee?

Who?

I know I had some left.

Who would dare!

Who drank my coffee?

Who?

Temperature at its optimum

I know I had some left.

Who drank my coffee?

Where did it go?

I enjoyed it so much

Who?

Who drank my coffee?

I didn't get that last drop

Where were you conscious thought?

Did you forget?

Who drank my coffee?

An aroma so divine

Were you just daydreaming thoughts?

Consciousness gone blind!

Or was it you sub-conscious.

 Who was caught off guard?

Distracted in thought

Have you lost your mind?

Who drank my coffee?

I want to know?

I was robbed by such treachery!

Who?

Before I lose my mind.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Who drank my coffee?
An aroma so divine
Were you just daydreaming thoughts?
Consciousness gone blind!"

Lol. Your wittiness drips like sweetened coffee. An outstanding and flavorful write...:)......

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[Dr. Wood ?]

You are not the only one
to end up in this fix
It is due to Caffeine Man
that guy knows all the tricks
He flies round in his Bean Machine
with sensors so refined
And Caffeine Man is so alert
with one thing on his mind
You idly set your coffee down
that drink you've truly earned
And Caffeine Man just drinks it up
the minute your back's turned

[andrew mitchell]

I knew it was him lol Great lines Doc hilarious!

[B]

Lol
hehehehehe
you sound like me now
and you don't wanna sound like me lol
So funny
i am laughing by the way

[andrew mitchell]

Lol If your laughing you get it! Thanks niseenaa

[....................]

haha, who, indeed... wasn't me... but, if you had flavouring and sugar in it you might want to check with moonskittles or sereena... an entertaining interrogation of conscious and sub-conscious thoughts...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Ft Its funny how you daydream drinking a lovely cup only to regain your senses and its empty and you thought you had more!

[....................]

yeah... it is funny... or is it ageing :)

[andrew mitchell]

it started young doctor FT when I was.....

[....................]

what was starting? What were we talking about again? Who is this? :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are on another roll. Best get to bed without the coffee as it will keep you awake. Another interesting write that takes an ordinary event (oh I think your wife just cleared the cup into the dish washer) and makes it poetic. One line I can't grasp though is 'I was robbed of such treachery!' If you were robbed of treachery you did not have the opportunity to be treacherous yourself?

[andrew mitchell]

It was treachery that I did not witness the last gulp taken!! Where were my thoughts? to alert me? lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

'Robbed by' in that case my upside down dweller!

[andrew mitchell]

thanks me man lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I expect a slice of the royalties pie when you are a rich and famous rock star!

[andrew mitchell]

you'll be waiting as I am lol Try Ms Jewel or other deserving poets lol Cheers. I wish I was in the rolling Stones band. Abuse the body and mind and cos you are doing something you enjoy you can't die and live forever. Rest in peace Christopher Lee My Idol in acting!