Tenderised

Tenderised

A Poem by andrew mitchell

A steak that just melts
When beaten with a hammer
Tender are the thoughts.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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A heart that just melts
When beaten with love
Tender are the harps

lol
Sweet
i see your steak is well done
Don't overcook it :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


all i could think of first was 'cave man' ... clubbing that 'steak' and dragging it home... but that last line tells me your heart is the only steak being tenderized here :) Well-grilled, my friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Not a good one but I was cooking at the time! Thanks FT
A juicy little tit bit of a senyru that has my mouth watering and reminded me I have a steak in the fridge lol! I never thought I would read a 'tender' love poem from you Andrew!

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Lol I work in mysterious ways my Scottish Fish Haddock Pie! lol!:)

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Added on June 13, 2015
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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