Steel Love

Tempered is the love

Hot, hard as steel that can rust

If not protected.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I see from this crisply spoken senyru that you run your love life with a rod of iron. Puns intended lol!

[andrew mitchell]

John I love the cheek we share lol you crack me up and make me smile. Thanks John. For the record I just write whatever comes to mind lol

[~]

Well, on one hand tempering removed the excessive hardness, and on the other hand the lack of proper coating making the love go to waste. A giant pickle sounds like :D

[andrew mitchell]

does it sound that bad lol

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better run and get some rust check or rust guard or some kind of anti-rust spray to protect that hot, hard steel... nice senryu, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

Too late I'm rusty already FT lol :)

[....................]

hahaha... go get sand blasted, that'll take care of you :)

[andrew mitchell]

My wife would prefer a trade in! lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nah too late she'd be best seeing what she can make at the breakers (scrap) yard lol!