That smile

That smile

A Poem by andrew mitchell

She looks at me
With lazy smile;
Contentment shines;
A wild child.

She caresses her glass
With her cigarette
Her thoughts free
Emotions  wet.

Her warmth wraps
A blanket, sunshine
Unadorned is the love
Her smile.....one of a kind.

While nothing is said
Everything is understood
Precious our smiles
Because this moment
Will never be again.........

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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alf
hey Andrew!!! Stop hogging all those moon pills!!! This is such a brilliant write!! You have taken a moment in passing and soooo captured it on paper!!! Well done my friend!!! alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thanks alf I love moon pills! lol
alf

9 Years Ago

So do I when I get to read stuff like this one!!!! Take another couple!!!
Its always nice to sit and sometimes not even say a word.."because this moment will never be again". So true that line is Andrew. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you my friend
the encounter,love in motion trying to read each other`s mind
a great write

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

you was supposed to say they ain`t no lobsters in the creek
andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

lol...............
 wordman

9 Years Ago

then I would say oh hell! what was that we ate lol
each moment exists on its own... each encounter creates such a moment... and a smile is everything, even if it is never acted upon... and you are right, Andrew, sometimes nothing has to be said in order for there to be understanding

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

oh, lobster... love lobster... i had lobster roe sandwiches for lunch :)
andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Over 60 dollars here for a small one
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9 Years Ago

holy cow... you can get a two pound lobster here for about $10
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B
A smile
The window to pretty much everything
If she smiles way too much
You just got too lucky lol

Lovely as always Andrew :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

lol thank you Nisreenaa or she could just be too happy!
B

9 Years Ago

that too ol
B

9 Years Ago

lol ......................................
That encounter , that look and smile that can capture us from across a room! Beautiful and sensual write AM .., love it !! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This, Andrew reads like a casual encounter with a stranger across a room and has that quality of reflective disappointment that it will never be more than that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

yes so right you are john, those fleeting moments of grandeur stopped only by a domineering conscien.. read more
You painted a super sensual scene Andrew my friend - where "nothing is said, Everything is understood" -
This is the second poem in a hour that has that 60's free spirited wild child feel to it - which I love - but whats happening? I didnt get the memo.


Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thanks Anto and it was the memo of love lol

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Added on June 6, 2015
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andrew mitchell
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