Thirst

With your heart bleeding

In a pool of blood I swim

My thirst for love feeds.

Reviews

[Robert]

Vampires always "thirst" for that pool of blood. I think it would be a complete hassle to be a vampire. I like the shortness and to the point of this poem Andrew.

[GreenEyedPoet]

I don't know if this was intended to be a dark write, but that's what I got from it! lol.
I pictured someone feeding off someones love, bleeding them dry, probably leaving them with a broken heart.
Awesome write AM! :]

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks GEP A vampire tale!! lol

[GreenEyedPoet]

Haha my kind of poem then! Vamps are awesome. :D

[sereenaoutloud]

this is rather dark to me...
The image it creates for me is someone feeding off of a broken heart!! lol
Brilliant and powerful Senryu,,,you are really good at these and i am really liking the PM side!!

[andrew mitchell]

its a sort of dark vampire fictional tale here lol

[sereenaoutloud]

Dracula Andrew :)

[andrew mitchell]

lol What a lovely neck you have!!!

[sereenaoutloud]

yeh and i have sharp teeth too..and cat like reflexes ...LOL

[andrew mitchell]

hahahaha lol the smiles you bring LL lol

[B]

Very sensual
Love It Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Why thank you Nisreenaa :0