Torn!

 Torn ....

Ragged is the love

Ripped from the heart

Shredded to view

On ground lifeless.

Torn.

Reviews

[GreenEyedPoet]

Such a powerful impact this has.
Great write AM. :]

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks GEP

[GreenEyedPoet]

Welcome. :]

[sereenaoutloud]

Wow this makes such a powerful impact...Ragged, Ripped, Shredded, lifeless....brilliant word choice AM. You can really feel this!
Brilliant! :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks LL deep fiction, dark writing I was aiming for, for a change lol

[sereenaoutloud]

I like it..you write dark really well..PM lol

[Sami Khalil]

You have nailed it on the head. The final effect in your excellent words of reality...:)............

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Valentine]

Losing love in any way breaks the heart. Valentine

[fattycbreezy52]

Yes,it is torn.
Such hard-hitting words.Yet, gripping.
No one can beat reality.
Maybe, that is why they always say delve into reality.
I like this work of yours !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

For a happily married bloke you are really delving into the heartbreaks of love and encapsulating them in a word Andrew. This reminds me of the Natalie Imbruglia song of that name.

[andrew mitchell]

happily I am but it was the journey getting there lol