Desert storm

Desert storm

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The beating sun rains dry
On desert moons, crusts.
Crows cry in the distance
Snakes slither, sandy tracks
Creeks dried, sauna baked
Bearded dragon waits.

Shadows cringe
Under brushes thin
Of bushes mourning
The wind , dusty cries
Clouds gathering laughing
Black pepper scurrying;
Ants barricading nests.
Frogs croak with salty breath.

Life tickets paid in full
They want their show
In silence, they wait. 
Anticipating.......

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Imagery in this is awesome! You really set the scene for the reader. Loved this one. :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you GEP Based on a movie Rango, my favourite of our kids movies lol
GreenEyedPoet

9 Years Ago

It sure inspired a great write. :D
....the storm. Awesome!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow you painted such a beautiful picture with your words AM this just amazing.
As Alf would say ..you set the bar so high with this one!!
I love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you sereena you smile bringer you
Absolutely stunning in imagery and wording. Sad but true...:).............

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thanks Sami
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome ...:).................
sounds like a sad place to be

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thanks wordman aussie outback!!
Woww a sandstorm imagery. Wish to witness one some day.
How I would love to caress those cacti and rape my eyes to reach out to an oasis any how before I am blown away eternally by the sands of time.
Amazing choice of words and amazing imagery again
love thr last stanza. It took mt heart away:)
I can say that I am in love with a desert now! ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


You set the scene very well in that opening stanza Andrew. I can feel the heat from here, and how I wish as its flipping cold right now lol!
one typo:
Frogs croak with salty breath.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 1, 2015
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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