Her Formula one revs

Pulling back the bed sheets, open

She says "Get in!"

Her Formula One, her love... revs, revs.

An aerial view

I travel by eye

Her figure eight circuit.

Through long winding curves

From mountains, round plains,

Along the coast, her ocean road 

Through her tunnel of love.

She drives through her sighs

With Grand Prix mind

That's running wild,

Changing gears within her heart

The surrounds, ocean road to mountains bound

We move, along her circuit.

Winding are her curves:

The Monaco coast

Sunlight on skin,

Changing gears.

Humming hearts hum.

Smooth legs silken

Breeze flowing hair

She drives like the wind.

In the distance, light

Rays shower through clouds,

The sun smiling, shimmering

On water's edge, reflecting,

Shining love, her coastline.

On moistened skin touching,

Kisses on kisses red

Around the circuit, we move.

Her Formula One , her love, revs revs.

On her winner's circle, her flags are flying.

Champagne pops! 

Reviews

[RomaJ]

The "rev revs" got my head spinning. Pulses racing at this passionate "ride" er, write haha

[andrew mitchell]

haha you roadster you!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Great metaphor in a flowing free verse Andrew and full of passionate 'turns' of phrase!

[andrew mitchell]

Lol thank you King Of Scotland Poetry

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Brilliant my friend!!! What a track!! What a drive!!! Loved this!!! Want to talk to you soon!!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks alf Kind words my friend!!

[alf]

Have you forgotten??????????? I never say kind words, truth . . . whatever form that may take, alf

[sereenaoutloud]

What a race this was...TTM!! Great metaphor and a thrilling write from start to finish!! :))

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks sereena, a close race but alas I came second!! lol

[sereenaoutloud]

hehehe as it should be AM ...as it should be!! :))

[....................]

A delightful race you've described, Andrew... something tells me there was a home circuit advantage... loved all the lines in this one, my friend... well-done!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much FT keep ya eyes on the road!! lol

[B]

She is the thrill
How lovely

I can feel the ride
Smell the fresh air
Listen to the music

"her flags are flying"
I love this .......
Really cool poem

[Valentine]

Race track huh? The bed sheets being pulled back show what kind of adventure you were on. Nice flowing write. Valentine

[andrew mitchell]

Just a nice drive Valentine lol. Thank you for your kind words!