Her thoughts

I walk her shores, her thoughts

That wash onto her beach

That projects and retracts.

A lure she presents me;

Her waves, waves.

Awaits, my decision

Games commence!

We swim together;

Sunsets embraced.

Game over!

Reviews

[alf]

Hey Andrew, love those thoughts!!! Mind you, they can always be a little dangerous, don't you think??? Great write!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

of course lol alf as we know!!!

[alf]

Hi, my friend. I have 190+ writes to read and then I will have more time to chat!! penance for taking time out!!! lol!!!

[andrew mitchell]

wow are you under the pump! No probs Oh Popular One !!! lol

[B]

Waw that started and ended fast lol
Is it ever just like that ...... Her thoughts always linger

and so do your thoughts linger in her head ....... i guess

Well penned Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

seems quick to read but no time was given lol sometimes its a short walk on the beach!!

[....................]

have to be careful with the undertow, Andrew... those surface thoughts pull us in but by the time we realize it, it's far too late to make it back to shore... well-done!

[andrew mitchell]

FT you are a genius I may have to pinch that word undertow!! Thank you FT

[....................]

go ahead :) it's yours!

[andrew mitchell]

I don't wanna cause a rip or a tsunami!!

[....................]

it's only a pinch, Andrew...lol