Nothing works!

Nothing works!

A Poem by andrew mitchell
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A day when nothing seems to be working, or feels right and everything is obscure, just crazy!

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Empty is the stomach
When the hand that feeds
Is no more.
The wallet empty!
Both runneth away with legs.
"Come back Legs!"
"Bring back my hand
To work, that feeds,
That works!"
" Come on legs!" " Move it!"
" I need you!"
Now! Where's my mind?
"Lost!" 

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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haha... one of those days eh, Andrew? Thankfully there aren't too many of them :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

you never plan them they just come FT in threes!!
Oh and these are also the days that seem to drag on too!!
It is like slogging through the mud and getting no where! Brilliant write that so many people i am sure can relate too!

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

I hate it when one job depends on whether all the other things work to do that job and if they don'.. read more
Welcome to my world! Cleverly penned.....I get distracted at least 11 times while making a cup of coffee, so finding that lost mind is a daily, umm....hourly challenge for me....:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you sleepless hence the coffee!!! Thanks my friend!
I definitely can relate as I have days like these my friend. Well penned... I love the way you created dialogue within yourself... awesome job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thanks Aaron, its safer to stay in bed some days! lol

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