The Headache

Swerving recklessly

A thought drunk.

Going too fast, too fast;

No brakes!

"IS TROUBLE! "

Can a thought be

In the wrong place?

Where it shouldn't be?

Is a  headache an accident

By two thoughts crashing

Head on?

One wounded, one a fatality

Crashed on cranial walls.

Or crashed in mid-air;

Being light-headed.

Still the headache remains

Are the party of thoughts still drinking?

Turn the music down!

Lights out at twelve.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

The party of thoughts know no curfew, at least not your's! ; )

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kelly very much lol

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A very interesting idea of two thoughts collision to provide a headache, but what happens when there's a traffic jam??? :D
hey congrats for the Australian song in Eurovision by the way. Cool song :D

[andrew mitchell]

A Jam would be a migraine lol and thanks eurov and thanks ms

[~]

naaahhh I think it would be cluster headache LOL :D

[andrew mitchell]

lol.............................why didn't I think of that lol

[~]

Hehehe :D :D

[Jamestown]

Well written!
I really like the description of thoughts crashing which
causes a headache, very creative!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed

[andrew mitchell]

thanks Jamestown