The Headache

Swerving recklessly

A thought drunk.

Going too fast, too fast;

No brakes!

"IS TROUBLE! "

Can a thought be

In the wrong place?

Where it shouldn't be?

Is a  headache an accident

By two thoughts crashing

Head on?

One wounded, one a fatality

Crashed on cranial walls.

Or crashed in mid-air;

Being light-headed.

Still the headache remains

Are the party of thoughts still drinking?

Turn the music down!

Lights out at twelve.

Reviews

[Cassie]

Thoughts crashing...me love that, but you know when good thoughts crash, there is no headache not unless you get that headache out of making merry and taking lots of booze as a way of enjoying..lol

[andrew mitchell]

lol lol Thank you Cassie

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

So I don't drink....but I love the thought of thoughts crashing....makes what seems like a short fun poem morph into something that really has depth and texture...although your writes are also always fun to read :0)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you jane for your kind words

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Back for a temporary session!!! The head is fogged with flu!!! Anyway, will do what I can before I go back to bed. I truly think you have written this poem for my head at this moment!!! Tried to laugh, because it is so funnt, but only managed a weak smile. Does that tell you how bad I feel!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Hope you get better alf, its been a bad year for me also like I've continuously got a cold.

[GreenEyedPoet]

This is such an interesting and creative poem AM!
I don't think I've ever read anything even similar to this.
It makes the reader think - least in my opinion! lol.
I guess my thoughts were partying and crashing all weekend cause I've had a headache off and on for days now lol. Darn things need to chill out lmao.

Awesome write AM. :]

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you GEP sorry I missed you. Glad you enjoyed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

No worries AM! :)

[sereenaoutloud]

well what does a migraine mean then? 2 thoughts fighting to be the first? lol
As always i love your writes..they are not only brilliantly penned they are creative and fun! such a pleasure to read AM :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sereena for your kind words and a migraine would be a brain slide of many thoughts doing a running marathon from start to finish line with heavy feet!! lol

[sereenaoutloud]

lol...of course it would be ..duh!! lol

[....................]

Andrew, only you could create these kinds of scenarios and pose these very valid questions... the crashing of two thoughts, perhaps one or both in the wrong place at the wrong time... you are the thought party thrower, the thought police and the thought bar keep... another round of thoughts!! No? ... what do you mean we have to go... I want to talk to the..... take your hands off of me... I'll give you light headed... lol

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FT your delightful comments made me laugh!! Thanks again FT lol:):)

[Robert]

Very clever piece my friend. The topics you pen are so original. Good writing.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Robert

[Dr. Wood ?]

clever stuff....I'll try to remember this next time I am driving,,,whoops..I am driving NOW>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>


Phew!!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thanks Doc

[Dr. Wood ?]

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....................******

[andrew mitchell]

Officer I wasn't driving! Honest!! It was my thoughts! The auto pilot failed!!

[Dr. Wood ?]

ha ha..................

[Matching Socks]

Ha! Very unique idea. When thoughts collide...
Nice job.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much Ana. Something different! lol