when the hook, hooks!..... hooked!

when the hook, hooks!..... hooked!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When the hook,
Hooks the heart.
Heavy is the catch.
To hold, admire,
Cherish, keep. 

If its not forever!
Let her go!
Tasty as it is!
Today's menu is not fish!

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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B
Good one
Not fish indeed
never

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Nisreenaa lol a metaphor if you don't love someone don't pretend let them go! lol
B

9 Years Ago

agreed .......... i do not know how to pretend
when i do not love someone the entire world kn.. read more
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alf
Hi Andrew. You are in the swing with this series of poems. I am glimpsing a mood just below the surface here????? love this, there are always plenty more, it's finding them that poses the problem!!! alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Hi alf yes I like this one but not an audience fav lol only you alf did a first lol

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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