Hard pressed!

Hard pressed!

A Poem by andrew mitchell
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I wanted this political but then with brackets containing another track of thoughts menage de trois ! evolved lol

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I question
Two thoughts (hers) that
Wrestle in the ring of doubt.
Hard pressed.
Two- party preferred.(third party) 

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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alf
Hi Andrew. No my friend. Leave it as it is!!! Its just perfect and raises a smile that this happening to somebody else!!!! Love it!!!!!! alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

thank you alf
tough to keep those thoughts out, eh Andrew?

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

no good!! FT !! I liked it. but Should I leave as is or remove the bracket contents!!

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andrew mitchell
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