The Heart's last dance

On her heart

I dance the tango

My footprints softly on her.

Her love was a dream, she made come true

The warmth of our dance still remains....

Alone......I leave the

                       Music on.  

Reviews

[alf]

Wow! Passion flows through this piece. I believe this write has zoomed to the top of your poems. this is strong, sensuous, nostalgic and sad, all in one short verse. Love the brevity, any more would be too much, any less would be devastating~!! Perfect balance!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

looking at it now there are many interpretations on this piece and thank you alf

[alf]

Soooooooooooooo true!!!!!!!!

[dan]

Andrew (and I thank sereena for bringing this piece to my attention), At first I thought "This one leaves me wanting more," but after reading it again I recognize that it ended as it was written...perfectly. This is an incredibly beautiful piece of art. I am happily placing it into my library favorites. My highest compliments! take care...dan

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Dan and for dropping by. I am happy that it has become a favourite, thanks to Sereena. I shall visit soon dan.:)

[ANTO]

Better to have loved and lost
So much bittersweet atmosphere in this
The record plays on and the memories remain well beyond the dance
I enjoyed this a lot Andrew.
Pure Class.

[andrew mitchell]

thanks Anto captured well your comments:)

[JayceeC]

Lovely little write..Yours and Sereena's fit so well together...I know yours was the original, but it makes it mutual dance as a pas a deux rather than a solo performance with only a memory. The last line gives an clear invitation for return..smiles for that bit of nostalgia. Lovely!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you jayceeC for dropping in and they were complimentary

[JayceeC]

Its a beautiful colab.

[nazia]

I read Sereena's response first, and now as I read the original poem, its understandable why she wanted to write a response. Its a beautiful tango of love here... Lovely :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Nazia. You are all too kind!!!

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh AM ..no i think PM wrote this. So romantic, swaying in the night..on a cobble street under a glowing street lamp...yep love this one sooooo much I wrote a poems response...hope you do not mind!! :))

[andrew mitchell]

Really a poems response!!!?? I don't mind!! lol Thank you sereena!:):) You are too kind LL!!

[B]

Taking it away Andrew
Going into my library my friend

[andrew mitchell]

You are too kind Nisreenaa. Thank you.:):)

[B]

Oh my
My heart is tingling

How sweet

Oh my