Ok! Now, take off your belt real slow and drop 'em!

Undressing

Her thoughts, naked her views

Vulnerable she is! Trust.

I conquer her lands, her spoils now mine.

Her thoughts on floor I ravish

Her naked, her lands

Divided.

Reviews

[jesserose99]

those thoughts didn't do a very good job covering too much, I guess, she didn't want them too...lol

[andrew mitchell]

haha You are right I was manipulated! Thank you dear poet friend.:)

[sereenaoutloud]

Such a naughty sensual write...but it is beautiful. 'Undressing her thoughts" "Vulnerable she is! Trust" Yes it is completely trust!!
I think you could be a true romantic at heart AM you are a very talented writer, to be able to be funny, serious , sensual and romantic not easy to do my friend....you are so versatile!!

[andrew mitchell]

with 99 different sexual positions I'm told Versatile is the key!! lol Only joking!! I thank you sereena, as my cheekiness covers my blushing ( now you know) with the kind reviews. Thank you my friend LL. You give me smiles with your time!!

[sereenaoutloud]

LMAO.....as always you make me laugh and turn crimson red!! NO way did you Blush?? omg i never thought i would see the day TTM blushed...heheh BBM (blush blush mitchell) woop got ya!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol.................... cheekiness is my disguise didn't you know!!

[sereenaoutloud]

Yes i can see that...but i still do not see you blushing or being shy!! :)

[andrew mitchell]

blush blush blushing blush!!!! Red Red Red red!!!! Shy!! I hide Shy I hide !!!,blush blush vanished!! TTM here !!!don't push your luck!! lol

[sereenaoutloud]

I think i already have...lol

[AaronFreitas]

I wasn't sure if this was a romantic write or an strip search from the title lol.... Awesome words I really enjoyed it... "Her thoughts on floor I ravish her naked, her lands divided." Loved it :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Aaron, a naughty one lands divided, legs divided!! I know I know wicked am I lol