Heavy are....

Heavy are my thoughts

In a well dug deep.

The bucket that lifts

Struggles on thoughts

So heavy.....

Pulling, lifting

That lays so deep

Thoughts buried ...

Heavy are....

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Like the downpour of rain that creates the natural well, so does the depth of thoughts filling one's mind... a deep image you have penned here, Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks FT for your time and kind words.:)

[alf]

Hi Andrew. You got that right, my friend!!!!! So very heavy. Always below the surface of a smiling face, waits a well of thought!! Just depends how deep the well is, how heavy the thoughts are. Once again, you have taken a particle of man's psyche and turned it into a gem, maybe a diamond for this one!!!! love it!!! I may be a bit slow lately, but I always get there!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks alf a well can be just from a lot on one's mind!!

[alf]

Sooooooooooooo troooooooooooo!!!!