HER SKIN SO SOFT I.............

Hugging her tightly

Pulling me close

Travelling down her body,

Her hands on mine

Her skin is moist.

Her neck line;

Heavenly scented

Allowing me to roam;

Wrapped around her

Freedom to move.

She's comfortable.

I brush her thighs,

Her legs ...softly.

I touch her breasts,

Her bottom, held tight.

I protect her,

Comfort her,

Parade her with

Colour, style.

I'm her chauffeur.

Looking at me

We dance;

Spinning, twirling.

I feel her...

Heat on skin;

Warmer, warmer,

She unzips me

I fall to the floor!

I am................................................................ HER DRESS!

Sometimes, I give her  wedgies!! :)

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Reviews

[PANDORA]

I think the end adds such a sweet note to the romance.

I'm her chauffeur.--a great line.

The first two stanzas are describing the travel of the jet-setter...I would shift the second stanza in a different direction. Just a suggestion, it does not make or break the writing.

Thanks for the adventure.

[RomaJ]

Laughing out loud hahaha BRAVO!!! you had me there...too funny:) brilliant write!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Roma Gotcha!! lol

[Mick Burke]

Brilliant Andrew. I love your sense of humour. "Sometimes, I give her wedgies", love that finish!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Mick lol

[B]

Lol

That is hilarious
Laughing right now lol

[andrew mitchell]

lol I'm glad you laughed Nisreenaa. Now choose your dress!!!! lol