HER SKIN SO SOFT I.............

Hugging her tightly

Pulling me close

Travelling down her body,

Her hands on mine

Her skin is moist.

Her neck line;

Heavenly scented

Allowing me to roam;

Wrapped around her

Freedom to move.

She's comfortable.

I brush her thighs,

Her legs ...softly.

I touch her breasts,

Her bottom, held tight.

I protect her,

Comfort her,

Parade her with

Colour, style.

I'm her chauffeur.

Looking at me

We dance;

Spinning, twirling.

I feel her...

Heat on skin;

Warmer, warmer,

She unzips me

I fall to the floor!

I am................................................................ HER DRESS!

Sometimes, I give her  wedgies!! :)

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Reviews

[PANDORA]

I think the end adds such a sweet note to the romance.

I'm her chauffeur.--a great line.

The first two stanzas are describing the travel of the jet-setter...I would shift the second stanza in a different direction. Just a suggestion, it does not make or break the writing.

Thanks for the adventure.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

OK I am going to say it; that final, uncalled for line ruins an otherwise clever and sensitive piece!

[andrew mitchell]

Hi John, Yeah! it was a throw in just to break up the romance of it all lol I do that!

[alf]

Hi Andrew. I had reviewed this poem, but it doesn't show!!! Wonder if that was the day I had so much trouble with the internet!!! Anyway, I shall repeat all that I said back then!!! I Luuuuuuuuuuuuv this. This is such a brilliant write!!! I don't think I have EVER read a poem from this perspective!!! My mind just kept thinking you had travelled to the uh-huh side of the road . . . until I got to the end, then I couldn't help laughing. this was told so very well!!! A true delight!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Hi alf Was a big twister this one lol and came out just the way I wanted to depict it lol and Oh to be a dress!!! lol lol Thank you alf I'm all smiles!!

[alf]

You did such a brilliant job!!! And who wouldn't want to be a dress when we hear how sensuously sexy that can be!!!!!!!

[andrew mitchell]

yeeesssssssss!

[....................]

Love it... such anticipation built up to such a twist... classic AW!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FT lol

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. I like the surprise endings. Some men would be jealous of the dress. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you CP and how we perceive things in a different light! The dress sees and feels a world similar but different to us!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. You gave life and reason to the dress. You are welcome.

[KWP]

hahahahahaha - oh dear - a dress that gives one wedgies - now thats no dress for a gal to be wearing - your quirky brain is very endearing I must say - hehehe - now get her to pick you up so you can be 'well hung' once more !!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol I like your witty comebacks lol but the view from the floor................ I see dust!! lol

[KWP]

OMGawd !!!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol teasing kwp .............. a dress can only see dust on the floor lol

[KWP]

Hahahahahhahahahaha - just my mind driftin the wrong way as usual X

[andrew mitchell]

so was mine but i'm not a dress lol

[AaronFreitas]

Haha I was thinking how romantic this was getting til I bursted into laughter lol.... awesome work buddy!

[nazia]

You have become a master of funny humorous pieces... each time I read your work, wit is what I look for and you my friend never cease to amaze me...... the quirks, the irony everything is so beautifully weaved in .....Amazing

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much my friend lol thank you Nazia

[sereenaoutloud]

totally got me on this one...so funny ..you are a master at these fun but brilliantly written poems. It is not easy to write with such humor...i am learning it is actually really hard (for me anyways) i am in awe at how easy you make it look!! TTM :)

[andrew mitchell]

I'm glad I got you LL and sereena, Thank you. TTM

[sereenaoutloud]

always a pleasure TTM :)

[Robert]

That was GREAT!...Andrew another good piece you wrote. Humor is always good for the soul.

[andrew mitchell]

Humour and writing is good for the soul and many thanks Robert

[Jamestown]

What a sense of humor you have, lol!
Well written and delivered!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jamestown, Glad you had a laugh