The Cycle

                                                  As we lie

                                                Side by side

                                                  Together

                                             Our spirits rejoice

                                                  Lost in love

                                                    Our love

                                             Cemented in time

                                              Beloved Husband

                                                 Beloved Wife

                                                    We smile

                                                 We give back

                                                   To Mother

                                                       Earth

                                                   Nourishment.   

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Now we face the final curtain!!! Cemented in time. Love that line!!! Says sooo much!!! Kind of nostalgic with a hint of sadness, but so good you have to be still with us . . . since you posted!!!! LoL!!! Loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks alf

[Jesse]

Loved it. The ending is like ashes to ashes dust to dust. Very nice!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jesse and you are so right! dust to dust!

[~]

An unbreakable love, like the circle of love. beautiful!! :D

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind words Moonskittles,I bowled you over!! Yippee!:)

[~]

more like stupefied :D

[andrew mitchell]

lol........................

[....................]

And such is the cycle of life, my friend... we give back to that which nurtures our bodies... just like the love between a happy couple... well-done!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my french speaking muso poet lol Multi skilled artist you are FT:):)

[....................]

haha, you are kindly welcome...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very beautiful love poem Andrew and I hope you both enjoy it for many years to come. Such a wonderful thing often taken for granted these days!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John but more of together after death is this write and to be remembered in cement!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I missed that in my yearning for earthly love lol!

[andrew mitchell]

Me too !!!Always had the picture but two minds are never alike lol!