A DINNER OF THOUGHTS!

Its a dinner party But I'm ignoring people's form or bodies present so we're all just speaking in thoughts lol. I know its over the top but a dinner conversation are just thoughts conversing! lol

Knock! Knock!

Oh! Hi everyone. Come inside!

Can I offer you a drink!

A wine of thoughts for me.

A beer of thoughts. Thanks.

I think I'll join you. A beer of thoughts it is!

Cheers everyone!

Do you want some butter on your thoughts?

Yes please!

How was the main course of thoughts?

Very nice! Thank you.

Anyone for second thoughts?

No! I'm full of thoughts.

Oops! I spilt my thoughts!

So sorry!

Who dropped their thoughts!

 Can I have another glass of red thoughts?

Of course! And you?

Just water. I like to water my thoughts!

Who wants thoughts for dessert?

They're sweet!

Me!, Me! Me too!....

Very rich with creamy thoughts.

I must say.Lovely dinner of thoughts!

Oh! Thank you. 

I thought the adjectives were a little dry. Overcooked!

But the chops of nouns were spot on

And the steamed verbs were just right!

Do you want the recipe?

Yes! I'll add this to by cookbook of thoughts.

Coffee or tea anyone?

Yes please!

How do you have it?

Just coffee and two teaspoons of sweet thoughts.

Ah! Good, same as me!

I'll have tea with no sweet thoughts. I'm on a diet.

Where's the loo?

Down the hall, turn left, you'll find it.

Thank you. Its the weather!

Have to pass some thoughts!

I've drunk too many thoughts!

I'm bloated on thoughts!

Please! Please! Too much information people!

Have you got toothpicks?

Yes! Of course!

I have a thought stuck between my teeth.

That's no good!

And what have you been up too?

Not much! Very quiet on thoughts.

And you?

I'm always busy with thoughts.

Look at the time ! I must go!

Have you got all your thoughts! Your coat of thoughts!

Yes I have! Thank you for having my thoughts over.

Whose  turn is it next week?

I think its mine!

What can I bring?

Oh! Just bring your thoughts!

Oh! and forgive me tonight.

I came in empty minded of thoughts!

I'll have them next week!

I perish the thought!

The End.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. This told me exactly where your head is at the moment!!! I do love the way you have taken that swirl of half wisps and drifts and relayed it in your story. This is a brilliant write!!! The rest I shall keep to myself, but trust me I had a great belly laugh, my mind in overdrive!!!! Loved this, almost at the top of the heap, my friend!!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks alf I wrote this 3am in the morning as I was half dozing! I was having a laugh as the story grew!! Glad you had a laugh too!:)

[alf]

One damnably good way to clear the mind!!!!!

[Neal S]

This is great! I was just smiling through the whole thing. I love the abstract process of this piece. Very cool!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Neal for your kind thoughts!

[Pete]

sorry andrew, as i was reviewing this i lost my train of "thought". i enjoyed the entire piece. very "thought" provoking. here's a penny for your "thoughts". "thought" i would drop by for a read. regards.

[andrew mitchell]

haha Pete you would forget your thoughts but the penny was good, thank you

[Blackheart]

Food for thought. I absolutely loved this poem and your witty writings are magnificent as always. The flow of the piece was gentle and that added to the wow factor in this one. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. :D

[andrew mitchell]

thank you blackheart

[Scrap]

Me thinks that your thoughts are delicious.

Thanks for the dinner.

[andrew mitchell]

haha the funny thing though A dinner party is just that, exchanging thoughts hence the humour of it all! lol Thank you

[θεά]

Delectable piece of writing. I have seen very few in our times who are as good with crisp witticism in their rhymes and poetic verses as you are Andrew!

Great piece of work.
No surprises on that!

Thanks for sharing.

Best,
M.

[andrew mitchell]

Wow thank you for your kind words Malika

[softlyfall]

a fabulous feast of felicitous famished filosophy (he he)

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much lol

[Coyote Poetry]

Need good drink and good company to create the possibilities of good conversation.
"Oh! Just bring your thoughts!
Oh! and forgive me tonight.
I came in empty minded of thoughts!
I'll have them next week!
I perish the thought!"
Good whiskey and beer make me the Hemingway tavern Poet. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

thank you john

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.

[Einstein Noodle]

your humor is working overtime me thinks! :) I would have to think it over; but seems you have pretty well rounded out poetic production ... some wield the tools with deliberation ..some without a thought to it .. ;) (like me) (no education) .. seems the power of either is divorced from a solid say ... or not .. at first i thought the thought was going to be made trite but as i worked my way thru the guests i was drawn into the flow of your thoughts ... i think!
E.
ps. oh yes ... I think therefore i yam! and i yam what i yam :)))))

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha lol thank you E

[sereenaoutloud]

So fun and actually so true lol
This is very clever and witty TTM ...
A fantastic write and a pleasure to read!!

[andrew mitchell]

thank you LL for your time and kind words :):)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write.... loved this story! A good laugh which is always a bonus.... good work! :)