Gourmet Pizza Express

Excuse me Sir!

yes!

Would you like to try our new Pizza line?

What have you got?

We have "EARTH"  A larger than Life with the lot with a thin crust.

Yummy!

We have "LIFE".    A large Life with the lot with a thick crust.

Oooh! Yummy too! And this one!

That one's called "TOMORROW". Sir. Its another chance with a thin crust.

I'll try that one! thank you.

Life always offers you a second chance

It's called "TOMORROW"

Enjoy tomorrow! 

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Love the creativity in this piece Andrew. You got it absolutely right... tomorrow offers us a second chance... a chance to do better than yesterday.. a chance to be happy and smile and a chance to love if we already don't. You did a great job with this one :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Aaron Was that pickup or delivery!lol:)

[613]

This poem has a lot of potential. I'm not sure if it's the way you phrased it or what, but something about this just didn't click for me.

Overall, nice work though.

- Brittney

P.S. If you wouldn't mind checking out my novel, HIM, I'd truly appreciate it. I'm looking to have it published but won't do so until I get as much feedback as I feel necessary. (:

[andrew mitchell]

thank you and ok

[613]

You're welcome. & thanks!

[Jamestown]

Great piece of pizza I mean writing, lol
I really enjoyed this positive message,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[alf]

Hey Andrew. Were you back out under the moon last night??? Or were those moonpils in play?? Great bit of moralistic introspection all nicely wrapped in a pizza box!!!! Love this!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Alf, The pizzas of life and tomorrow! lol

[alf]

Yeah, reckon I might have to mosey on down to the local . . .

[....................]

Creative and truthful words, Andrew... life does offer second chances; all we have to do is grab them!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks FT Yes! grab them of find them!!

[andrew mitchell]

or find them i meant lol