I wait

Drawn to her window

I see her heart and soul

I touch her glass tenderly

Our thoughts say hello.

In time I'll receive my key

To unlock her Heaven's door

Then, and only then;

Together our love

Will be; 

For eternity

Once more.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Such a beautiful description ..In time I'll receive my key" yes eventually death comes to us all and we can them be reunited with those that went before us! ..sad but a romantic thought! love this AM

[andrew mitchell]

Thank You LL

[B]

Longing for that one person

Its torture that is sweet

What a romantic piece you got there .....

I love it

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Nisreenaa

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A beautiful write, Andrew, full of longing to hold that key. Death comes to all of us and there is most often someone left behind in waiting. What a wonderful description of that waiting.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FT

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Romantic, whimsical and reflectively sad.

[andrew mitchell]

Just a tinge of sadness to satisfy the viewers!!!

[Shae]

Beautiful and simple :-) I could feel your words

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Shae

[alf]

hi Andrew. From the outset, you invited anticipation in the reader!!! Tender, emotional and filled with love!!! A truly emotive write that snags the heart of the reader and makes them catch a breath!!! loved this. Sometimes there is no need for words and you have captured this in your poem!! Great write!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you alf for your kind reviews that drives me on to excellence 1 billion light yrs away lol

[alf]

I don't think so!!!!!!!

[Relic]

This makes me think that somehow the spirit speaks to the speakers heart, leaving him with confidence that they two will be together again someday forever. Like this. :)

[andrew mitchell]

Its about seeing your love one in a coffin and the reassurance they will meet again with time

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered!
very sweet and romantic:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

thank you Jamestown