HER Love IS...

Her love is......

When she...

Satisfies my hunger

Comforts my soul.

She's the blood

Running through

My veins.

She carries me

through time.

I am whole. 

My LOVE, her flower

Her LOVE, my water.

Without her

I slowly wilt

And die....

I just wasn't

Born to live

Alone and die

.......................unloved.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Beautifully romantic (for once lol!) flowing free verse with a soul. Lucky you and long may it continue.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks John I hope so too

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Wow!! Deep and soooooo romantic!! I think, another heartfelt write so maybe nature was of some help!! One day, after reading this, I'd love to read something on the twins!!! Anyway, every line in this poem screams of emotion and it makes a really excellent read. I think . . . there is room at the top for just . . . one . . . more, before I raise the bar again!!!! alf