Dear GOD

Dear GOD,

I've been very very good today!

No swearing

No stealing

No bad thoughts

No wanton erotic desires

No wickedness

No birthday suit along my street

No tricks

No lies

No mischievousness

 Really I'm all good!

But I may need your help

I'm getting out of bed now;

So I need you, 

For the rest of the day. 

And maybe tomorrow

And the next and sorry ...

Friday and Saturday Nights and.....

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Fantastic, I read something very similar to this about. A month ago
and laughed as hard this time as the first, absolutely fantastic and
very humorous, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks J I saw a 4 line version so I used the idea and made it bigger!lol

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oh this is Good! I'm glad You are asking god for the help. And I got attracted by Your poetry. I read it very carefully every line. I didn't get this one "No birthday suit along my street" Can you please explain it?

[andrew mitchell]

Walking around in the nude lol A birthday suit is being naked, what you were born with lol

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH! I see :D Thank You. I get it :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok king of humour, I went along with this until I read 'No wanton erotic desires' and I smiled as I realised it was only verse Andrew!

Gosh you are prolific!

[andrew mitchell]

ok ok so I have desires lol Its reading dirty erotic poetry lol

[andrew mitchell]

John I've had all day to write my friend lol

[Dr. Wood ?]

DEAR God
I know you're busy
and I'm sure you think I'm boring
but for the umpteenth time tonight
PLEASE
STOP my brother's snoring

Great note to God Mate..I hope HE listens

[andrew mitchell]

Its just humour not based on fact lol

[Dr. Wood ?]

yeah...great subject though......

[alf]

Hi Andrew. I was just about to post a response when my eyes were drawn to ANTO's comment and he has already written my line!!!! raw and honest truth . . . That's what I love most about your poems, You have such a twist at the end!!! I could tell immediately, your prayer began on waking and didn't include the sleeping . . . when those dreams wandered through the corridors of memory and revisited those old . . . well, best we don't go there, perhaps!!! Luuuuved this!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

lol yes can't reflect on old flames lol

[ANTO]

Knowing you as i do Andrew -
this one "No wanton erotic desires" totally negates this one "No lies..."
just saying...

This is a fun way to pray my friend. Sweet and witty too. Well done mate.
:))

[andrew mitchell]

Hi ANTO lol I always admire and acknowledge beauty my friend lol

[....................]

haha, Andrew... there is no end to your creative wit, and that's a good thing (to quote Martha Stewart)

[andrew mitchell]

I will be dammed with my humour FT lol but its the smile one brings!! :):)

[....................]

A perpetual one this morning it seems :)

[andrew mitchell]

8pm here lol!

[....................]

We are at opposite ends my friend... 8AM here