The path I view

When I reflect

On you, the view.

And all the times we shared.

I smile so big...

Your life, your love,

Touches mine ,

And colours my world of you.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very succinct and romantic piece that shows deep affection and a sense of feeling blessed to be with one special person. Might substitute of of the 'life's for another word?

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John for your generous advice on many occasions and correcting my grammar which always fails me because I feel the flow of the words without reading the words if you know what I mean .