The Start

A new love's beginning 

Blossoms in view

We meet, we desire.

From the big divide we

Lower our defences

We ignite as one

As a true love seeps through

United we dance

How beautiful the tune. 

Within our fences we choose

To break as an action of

A love that is true.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew . . . And so we advance from morning to eve and guess what??? You've already forgotten your prayers of this morning!!! (Hooting with laughter up here!!!!) Actually, this is a very romantic poem, sensual with covert sexiness creeping through the lines, and of course you win me over with uniting in dance. I hear the melody, my friend, and just love the underlying passion, alf

[....................]

A wonderful sentiment describing the birth of love... it truly is the season.

What John said... the second last line is missing an 'n' on the a... should be "an action" ...

Nice write my friend.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love is in the air, everywhere I go! Spring spawning the unity of man and woman told in verse:

Penultimate line:
'To break as an action of'?

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks John That is better than the poem I expressed lol Top Dog! You are!!! lol