Bumpity bumpity dum

Bumpity! bumpity! dum!

My thoughts are

Intoxicated by rum.

Words come out, slurred

And seem quite absurd!

Bumpity! bumpity! Dum!

Bumpity! Bumpity! Dum!

Riding on the back of rum

No writing today

But not perturbed

Bumpity Bumpity Dum!

Bouncity! Bouncity! Thump!

My thoughts leap

In bounds and bounds

Twisting, twirling, falling

Somersaults: the sky

I see from the ground.

Bouncity! bouncity! Thump!

Jumpity! Jumpity! Thump!

I see from the ground

An ant walks by

Stops! As if to say hi!

Funny looking at the little world

From the floor looking at the sky!

Uppity! Uppity! Up!

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. That damnable floor is stealing the limelight again!!! Reminds me of the man who was, for the first time in his life, drunk. he sat outside, after a downpour of rain, terribly upset because the moon had fallen into a puddle. reflection of course, but so sad for him. I can just see those thoughts playing tag in your mind!!! -- drunk does that! I am now off to town, suddenly have a need to increase my stock of underclothing . . . I have laughed too much in the last week!!! alf

[....................]

All I can say is bumpity, bumpity, dum, my friend... a spirited, rum running rouse that lands one on the floor, smiling at the ceiling.

[andrew mitchell]

Cheers FT :):)

[sereenaoutloud]

lol lucky that after the rum you are facing up with a nice sky view ...usually i am staring at the grain in the wooden floor hehehe
Another great write with plenty of Spirit! :))

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my friend:):)

[Sami Khalil]

You dabble in poetry, music and now great humor...An excellent one that puts smiles on faces...:)................

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sami I feel I'm the court Jester while you are the powerful King of writes my friend wielding your sword while me with laughs lol :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are so kind. Thank you kindly. You are welcome...:).....