JUST DRIVE HE SAID!

I'm speeding I'm loving the feel

I turn on the lights. I up the gear.

I look at the speedometer increasing

20, 30, 40, 50,  over the limit.

I just don't care

I'm speeding;

Fast, furious, reckless

In higher gear. I'm free at last! Ha! Ha!

Oh! No!      No!         No!

I see red, blue lights flashing.

Flashing red, blue, red, blue.

I'm finished,

They're looking for me.

The poetic police

In poetic pursuit

Of me and my thoughts.

Shall I pull over

And lose my thoughts;

Arrested, imprisoned, lost?

Shall I let them give chase? 

Catch me if you can!

No! I decide to stop.

Poetic police open my door.

Exposing my thoughts

Naked to view.

We have clocked your words

Fifty kilometres per hour over the safety limit.

"What do you have to say for yourself, Sir?" asked the Poetic Police

"Poetry in Motion" I replied.

"Good answer Sir!" replied the Poetic Police.

"Drive on!"

Oh! I will!...

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

There's a bit of rebel in me that would just LOVE to see how far I could go...before the poetic police nail me! Good for you, Andrew! Next time, stop by and pick me up...we'll give those boys something to do besides eating donuts!

[andrew mitchell]

sure will , bring the wine and the legs and lets go! lol sorry its that pic again:):)

[micky]

This is a playful and fun piece with a much deeper meaning...i love it
Well done:)

[andrew mitchell]

Hi micky nice to meet you and thanks for popping in . Glad you smiled! lol

[micky]

Nice to meet you to fellow writer and i really enjoyed your piece

[alf]

Hi Andrew. have you heard Santa laughing??? okay . . . magnify that at least one hundred times!!! I never thought I would fall in love with a poem, but I am, enthralled, enchanted, bewitched, mesmerized, I am so crying!!! my sides are split!!! This has to be the best spoof I have ever heard of . . . in my whole life!! Hah! Now you have soooo much to do to retain that level, alf - also need to change me britches!!!!

[andrew mitchell]

HA HA HA Ha GOTCHA alf lol Your reviews are music to my ears and eyes. Thanks alf so much, Now go and change lol LOL LOL :):)

[alf]

You. re right up there in the humour!! I want to see this entered into the make me laugh contest!!! It surely has to be a winner!!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Is there one!!!

[alf]

Yep, there sure is. It really is called "Make me laugh". Just go into contests and scroll down until you hit it but please (With icing sugar, strawberries and whatever else it takes, enter that contest!!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol.................

[sereenaoutloud]

love this write..poetic police totally made me smile. Your creative mind has no limit my friend!! :))

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks dear sereena, my friend ,Its me TTM and say hi to ..... my dearest dearest dearest friend of mine LL :):):)

[sereenaoutloud]

hahah lol that i can see that it is TTM,, tell AM hi for me !!

[andrew mitchell]

No! he gets too much credit! INDEED! :)

[sereenaoutloud]

:)) i cannot reply due to the tears of laughter ..I can imagine AM pushed down locked inside screaming to get out while TTM takes over lol

[AaronFreitas]

haha nice piece my friend :) I enjoyed it and it brought a smile!

[andrew mitchell]

I know, you thought I was going to LAS VEGAS. I'm still checking my mail for the invite waiting, waiting, waiting for your great fun party!!

[~]

Ahahaha -- common now AM, your mind rides faster than 50 and hour :):)

[andrew mitchell]

Only on the freeway!! :):) I don't want to burn out! lol

[Jamestown]

Very well written, humorous and fun!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Jamestown I hope I had you thinking I was in a car lol

[Jamestown]

U had me along for the ride, lol