ENVY

Struck down,

Wounded,

Knife turns deep.

Blood; my tears

Falls splashing, painting

The floor in

Glorious red

Over green

With envy.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Who has been telling my secrets!!!! Come on, spill the beans, my friend!!! I'm going to find out and then . . . well, we'll see then. Ti's like you are reading my mind when I'm reading your poems!!!
Love this . . . Did you find that word in the dictionary???? alf

[andrew mitchell]

Ha Ha! alf ,envy you say !!! Its a reflection on your writes lol I think it was sereena that warned me of such writes of grandeur! It was her with her stern eye that said I have alf''s secrets. lol Thanks sereena!!!

[alf]

I just so crack up sometimes!!!!

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'red over green with envy' - very clever Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you FT I'm learning from the masters such as you, my friend!

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:) you are too kind sir!

[andrew mitchell]

I admire your excellent writes!:)

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Thank you, Andrew... I enjoy your work too and look forward to reading more :)