RHYMING WORDS TRAVEL IN MY MIND

Decorate

                 Generate

Permeate

                               Reverberate

Perforate

                                                     Isolate

                                Incarcerate

               Laminate

Commemorate

                           Separate

                                                      resonate

Meditate

                          Checkmate

Attempt fate

                          Sensations from words

                           Cloud my mind.

                           A displacement of sorts

                           Lay upon my mind,

                                 In words.

                        Confused! I am! :)                                                                       

Reviews

[Valentine]

Did you mean "thoughts" instead of "soughts". What ever they are! "Spring's Pain"


In the breeze I smell the scent,

Of springs...sweet smelling flowers.;

And recall the memories of time spent,

Wrapped in your arms... for hours.



Every spring..it is the same,

Recalling old thoughts...of you.

The scent of flowers brings your name,

And sad memories return anew.



The thought of you brings pain,

That I bury most of the year.

But in the springs warm falling rain;

Soon the blossoms... scent appears.





Memories of...those bittersweet days,

Of long walks ..in the spring;

And the days our two hearts lay,

In flowering fields...remembering.



I guess it will always be the same,

When spring... rebirths anew.
Years later I will recall...the pain...

When the flowers... bring thoughts of you.



Most people welcome the renewed birth of spring,

But...God took you away...and the scent of flowers

Brings just the hurt... of remembering,

For springtime only brings the pain of showers.



Now you eternally lay...beneath the flowers of spring;

And yes I stay here living through pains remembering.



Valentine

alentine

[E G TEN]

Wow! Somehow I'm thinking that YODA wrote this,, you my friend is a Master of this craft,, can't wait to read your other pieces! Thanks for sharing;)

[andrew mitchell]

Well thank you E G TEN. I shall view yours soon and thanks for dropping by.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the words. I will borrow a few to create a poem. I love words. Each word can take us to a different place. You are not confused. Just allowing the words to dance upon the page.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Coyote for your kind words and go for it, the words that is!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Did you mean sought s??? Is that where the confusion lies?? Actually, those words don't sound at all confused to me. Sometimes the mind takes over when we juggle thoughts, but presto! A new poem, a new form of expression, and new presentation and you say you are confused???? No way!!! but . . . if you really are, stay that way, especially if more little gems like this are on the horizon, alf

[andrew mitchell]

I meant of sorts lol

[AYVID N]

I try to use rhyme but only if I am a bit convinced that it all works to some extent when put together, not just for the sake of rhyming...I liked this poem a lot.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Tis why I avoid rhyming poetry like the plague lol! Well said though.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks John, A meaningless write of words that's all ,clouding my mind while I was waiting for a thought to write about.

[ANTO]

"Checkmate!" - you write just like me - why you could even be me for all I know ;p

The format excellently coveys the confuddled thoughts from which inspiration obviously springs in your versatile and unique mind. You snatch the words from the stream of thought like a seasoned Grizzly snatching salmon. Brilliant
:))

[andrew mitchell]

I hope its John West, the salmon! Thank you ANTO, may we travel this path of absurdities together lol:):)

[andrew mitchell]

I hope its John West, the salmon! Thank you ANTO, may we travel this path of absurdities together lol:):)

[andrew mitchell]

Your works seem so effortless, natural and poetry in motion ANTO. I enjoy your style!:)

[ANTO]

Well its not John Gabriel -
John West - is there any other kind of salmon. Can bears use a tin opener?
;))

[andrew mitchell]

only the ones you catch! I shall text big bear!:)

[Gee]

The grizzly removed his waders,
Safari jacket,hat,
through down his rod and box of flies,
"I wont be needing that."
Then donning yellow speedos,
and a fetching cap to match,
he lumbered into the rivers flow,
determined to salmon catch.
He plunged,dived,slapped and groped,
but all to no avail,
the closest to dinner grizzly came,
was a fleeting touch of a tail.
"F**k this for a game of soldiers"
he said as he reached for his phone,
"KFC,yep,send me an order,
20 chickens,all off the bone"

[ANTO]

Awww - I felt my stomach regurging at the thought of anyone in yellow budgie-smugglers. You sicko ! lol
The dopiest Grizzly since Boo-Boos mate here but damn if he is a bear after my own heart vis-a-vis the Colonels secret recipe chicken.
This is staight off the top of that wonderful noggin of yours Gee. You astound and disgust me (kidding - see speedos comment - lol)
I'd like to read more about the modern Yogi bear - I hope you keep him alive mate.
hows the head this morning ?

[Gee]

Hi mate,fine,very seldom drink these days,daft enough without it!!!!sitting in garden drinking coffee.JOY!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol................ mockers of my writes lol

[Gee]

Never Andrew,I thoughtockers were lady bollocks???

[Gee]

Mockers........

[andrew mitchell]

lol...........................

[~]

Been there, done that. :) the best is when it happens at school and the students look at me like: huh?!?!

[andrew mitchell]

lol I get that from my kids and my wife lol so I know what you mean but you have a larger audience. lol Thanks it was a meaningless write or thoughts splashed on paper! Thanks MS

[andrew mitchell]

You're an entertainer as well! MS