RAIN

I see rain,

Heavy rain

Outside my window.

Washing my every thought.

Its loudness

Permeates , reverberates

Refreshing my mind

Removing the rubbish

That clouds my mind.

I love rain

Cleanses the Earth

Cleanses my mind

With the watery view.

No pitter patter

Just heavy rain.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the rainy days. Time to think. I liked your thoughts about the rainy days. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Should've watched the damned weather map!!! I can see you, out on that terrace, not wanting to leave the sight of rain and waxing lyrical in the mind. Loved this!! I was born in New Zealand, I MISS the rain!! alf

[AYVID N]

Sometimes not the trickle but the flood we need. We need to be overwhelmed, to be shaken up, to be so taken up with the present that we flush out the past. I love the simplicity and clarity with which this need is expressed. A poem much appreciated.

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I love rain too, and thunder and lightning. Enjoyed your thoughts here, dear poet :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you lynn rain is poetry in motion to me!:)

[AaronFreitas]

I actually saw rain for the first time in a long time today. I love the imagery in the poem my friend... beautiful words.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Aaron, same here no rain in a long time and then today heavy glorious rain.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome we are in the middle of a major drought in California, USA