BULLIES!! ARE EVERYWHERE!!

An elephant was wandering

His favourite strawberry ground

Waving his trunk around;

Having a lovely munch!

Only to let out an almighty

SHRIEK! The world has ever heard.

Behold! An ant just stepped on the elephant's toe

To which when calm, the elephant replied

With tears in his eyes.

" PICK ON SOMEBODY YOUR OWN SIZE!!!"

The END.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. As I have said many times, you are so adept at defining the problem, analysing the essential, discarding the superfluous and addressing the nitty gritty. You have achieved that enviable logic again, my friend. I think you have reached uranium class with this one!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

lol .................. lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup... the end made me laugh:) But I do get the point. So, this is a great write!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank IM for dropping by:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome:)

[sereenaoutloud]

fantastic AM. Bullies truly are everywhere and come in all shapes and sizes! Great message is an amazing write!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sereena

[AYVID N]

Doesn't matter what size, it's the bite that counts! A story put together very interestingly and reading the poem brought a smile on and a realization, we can't know a bully by their size.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you......

[Vishuddha]

Shivers! Not too bad, imagining an elephant the size of an ant but, an ant the size of an elephant ... well, you really shouldn't.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Vishudda

[KWP]

Having a Lovely Munch - I do that all the time :)

I recently said the same think to a whalloping BullAnt up the coast - this one bit my naked foot hard and then marched along on his merry way whilst I was left with an ever increasing STING - I mean bloody hell it hurt - and what for did I get this sting - I was just playing ball on the lawn -

I like this write - it conjures many images for me X

[andrew mitchell]

KWP Thank you and I have been stung by an inch ant after falling into a blackberry bush and landing on their charming nest when I was a wee lad. ouch! If my poem conjures a image then I know my poem has reached out and touched someone like you:)

[....................]

Bullying works both ways, that's for sure. A great lesson here!

[andrew mitchell]

The last line was going to be "and the ant was squashed" lol Thanks for your review FT