Your Love, your Kite.

Your Love, your Kite

Lays bare on ground;

A date with wind; now sounds.

But who pulls on your strings?

Soaring high in the wind

The height of love;

How long the string?

Diving, rising, turning 

Just like love.

But who pulls your strings?

Now on the horizon

A twist of fate 

The weather turns

Darkness awaits.

Quickly! quickly!

Pull in your love

For blind is the night

As is love.

But too late! Too late!

After the storm, trust no more

Your Love ,your Kite

Needs  repair

The string now broken

A love lies bare

.......a watery end.

But who pulls your strings?

Your Love, your Kite.

Reviews

[angeline]

"Quickly! quickly!
Pull in your love
For blind is the night
As is love.
But too late! Too late!
After the storm, trust no more"---> the last line could be possible to those who hurt so much and it's like they have trauma in loving.

But I still believe, true love is powerful.
In the end, you will still trust people,
And fall in love again

Nice analogy of love and kite

[andrew mitchell]

I agree Su Amor. Only because the kite crashes sometimes did I choose this path lol. Thank you for reviewing:)

[~]

free as a kite- you did justice to the old phrase, capturing the lightness of feelings and the way how we tie them. :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you MS we all fly our kites:)

[GreenEyedPoet]

Love the imaginary, great poem. :)

[alf]

Hi Andrew. I am agape. This is just so wonderful!!! Love is a kite, chase it, play, let it out, reel it in, fly aloft, fall in a heap . . . such brilliant analogies. You are already reaching for the baton, my friend!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

alf you make me laugh when i read your great reviews my friend. I appreciated every comment you send. :):)

[Valentine]

Who pulls your strings? The kite soars, flies great for a long time, then for some reason crashes. I love your different references in this write. Very nice . Kudos. Valentine

[sereenaoutloud]

Imagery is fantastic, such a beautiful write ! :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very touching and meaningful write with great imagery and emotions. I like your style...:)....

[andrew mitchell]

thanks Sami much appreciated but for pound for pound your works carry a punch. I'm floored.:)

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly. You are so welcome...:)....

[wordman]

a great write, loved the metaphor who pulls your strings

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks wordman, yes emotions pull your strings as does on who you are with.

[wordman]

yes my friend that is true