2015 Whoosh!

2015 Whoosh!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Time is flying past. 
Whoosh!
I can't catch up
Already three months gone! 
"Threeeee!" I can't believe it! Next four!
I can't slow down.
Whoosh!
Too much to do.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Whoosh..time is flying by like the wind..doubtful it will ever slow down..feel the urgency in this piece..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

yes Fran Its scary lol how time is passing before my very eyes and before I can catch my breath lol
Tell me about it, and just like a holiday it speeds up as we go. Nicely expressed in a voice that indicates incredulity and moderate panic!

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thanks John, Yes the faster the time flies, more is the panic by me!! Its in sync! lol
"Whoosh" - one of the best words ever invented - makes me laugh everytime.
This is a wonderfully light write Andrew - like a slice of angel cake with tea.
Love it.
But slow down my friend - don't want you getting yourself into tizzy.
Thanks for everything Andrew.
:)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you my friend ,ANTO. Its nice to mix the light with the dark lol. Your reviews , your insight .. read more
ANTO

9 Years Ago

You're too kind. Thank you Andrew. You always humble me with your comments. :)
I completely understand this feeling! I love this poem. It's truth with a splash of humor

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

Thank you Shadow Poet , kind words
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alf
Hi Andrew. Yeah, the first trimester is the worst, if you're pregnant. Love this for the truth of it!! alf

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

9 Years Ago

alf you make me lol thanks alf

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