IT HAPPENED AT THE PICNIC THAT DAY

We're laying on the blanket

Just basking in the sun

She beckons me "come closer"

Sipping wine ; we become one.

Fuelled with desire

Senses all inflamed

There's no putting out this fire

A love that cannot be tamed.

I'm deep within her love

While caressed by the sun

We embrace love together

The feast has just begun.

As for the rest of the story

I leave it all up to you,

I leave the view, your imagination.

Pausing now to catch my breath

I have to finish our consummation.   ;)

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. This one has such a ring of authenticity, not that I'm asking for confirmation, just speaking as a reviewer!! So delicately phrased, but leaving the reader convinced of the intent. Great piece of writing, alf