PICTURES OF YOU

Pictures of you

The way you walk

The way you talk

Pictures of you.

The way you smile

The way you dress

High heels, make-up

Pictures of you.

Your flowing brown hair

Your alluring brown eyes

With eye shadow, mascara

Pictures of you.

The smell of your perfume

Jean Paul Gaultier

Your soft full lips

That shade of lipstick

Pictures of you.

Your long slender legs

The sway of your hips

Your body of curves

Pictures of you.

The way you gaze

Holding  your thoughts

Your inner beauty

Pictures of you.

The way you reflect

The way you see

Life, love and laughter;

Your zest for life

Pictures of you

A woman of beauty

A mind of wonder

A body to explore

Pictures of you.

Images of you

A reflection on me

Thoughts of you

I carry with me

                      ...Pictures of you.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. A very definitive description of a person you so obviously care for. Loved the flowing lines and the way you never struggled to find the right words. It all fell into place, telling me this came from your heart. Loved it!is a lucky lady, I think, alf! She

[Gee]

Sweet Andrew,are you the lucky man that partners this lady ?

[~]

Ohh wow!! I absolutely love this!! Nothing else but an adoring piece. The description is tantalizing and so playful. Each picture etched in memory, makes the reader want to meet this woman :)

[ANTO]

I love the way you employ repitition in your writing Andrew. Its not overbearing - it is just right (as Goldilocks might say) and each stanza brought a new attribute of the subjects to light - almost made me fall for her.
I would put the 'images of you' (final stanza) at the beginning of that stanza and end with 'Pictures of you' to complete the poem - it sseems that the four lines after 'Pictures of you' in that stanza are outside the write, to me, Andrew.
oh dear - I just realised that BST has just this minute kicked in and I've lost an hour in bed...
Goodnight Andrew - :))

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

OH! This was amazing! It was so beautiful. I could almost see this beauty!
I love the way you described her. She's very lucky to have such an admirer!

Fantastic job, love!