A FLEETING BRUSH WITH LUST THE SHADOW'S ROMANCE

A FLEETING BRUSH WITH LUST THE SHADOW'S ROMANCE

A Poem by andrew mitchell
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Love is the shortest distance between two hearts.

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Wrapped in loneliness
The cold, the bus stand.
The only warmth they share
Is blowing in one's hand.

Two lonely hearts reaching out
While their shadows on the wall
Love, dance; frolic about.

Tightly embraced; shadow's kiss
Of the movements; the lonely
How much they have missed.

Fondling, longing; Shadow's romance
To see such splendour from their dance
Of song and dance that cannot be heard
With music they play; They are not perturbed.

Night light is their audience
For darkness is their sun
They embrace these movements
As the passionate ones.

For then: their souls finally grew. 
On the  lamp lit walls
Covered in dew
Something to cherish, something new
The final curtain finally falls.

Now embarking  on the bus
Love is gone; in a puff
Lonely souls, the window, the view
A well lit wall, the night so still.
Gazing transfixed; empty thoughts
Two lost souls looking distraught. 

....LOVE
The shortest distance of two hearts
Two lonely souls longing to start
Like on the wall embraced as one ... their shadows
All they needed was someone to
                                             ....LOVE.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Hi Andrew. What deception lies in shadows and you have brought vivid imagery to that cruel deceit! I loved this. I felt as if two souls were melding, then learned the sad truth. This is great. Great in the content and the telling. looking for more . . . alf

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Oh, I love this Andrew! I really felt like I could see everything that was being said as I was reading this piece. A wonderful write!

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Hi Andrew. What deception lies in shadows and you have brought vivid imagery to that cruel deceit! I loved this. I felt as if two souls were melding, then learned the sad truth. This is great. Great in the content and the telling. looking for more . . . alf

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I can almost see it. Freezing cold, two separate people at the bus stop, freezing waiting and waiting. having to move to keep warm, no idea of the shadows that they are making nor how racy it looks. Neat write. Valentine

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Beautiful! I think, that you did a great job with this one. I love it:) Its creative:) well, for me at least:)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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