THE SONG REMAINS THE SAME

THE SONG REMAINS THE SAME

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Same old. Same old.
Alarm goes off, wake up, get dressed.
Same old. Same old.
Go to work, go home; familiar roads
Same old. Same old.
At work; same pressures, same stresses.
Night shifts, day shifts.
Same old. Same old.
Gee I need a holiday! Gee I'm tired!
Same old. Same old.
Arrive home, water the garden, mow the lawns, bins out.
Same old Same old
Have dinner, family time .Tickety boo! tickety boo!
Same old Same old.
Get ready for bed,  shower, wash teeth, 
Look in the mirror. Gee I'm old!
Same old Same old.
Go to sleep......
Alarm goes off, wake up, get dressed..............
 

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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yup... hehehe... replace work with school, leave out the “I'm old“ part, and add everyday pain... then its the description of me... huh... well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a great piece. Excellent description of a life stuck in repetition.
Great piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laughing. There are so many people out of work or living alone that would give there right arm to be doing what you are doing. I like the way you laid out this write. Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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