MY ESTUARY

Tears in the eye

A lake could fill

A dam that collects

A river that spilled.

My tears of love

Feelings that grew

Now tears of sadness

Just red eyes blue.

Reviews

[jesserose99]

my goodness, another facet to you Andrew, I love it. incredibly beautiful, and the flow...I wish I had thought of it!!

[andrew mitchell]

thanks!! haha you do alright as you are with your writes jesse

[Robert]

Well done Andrew It nice where you veer off in different directions with your writings. This was a tender piece to read.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Robert

[PANDORA]

First of all I liked the title. It could not be more perfect. Also,"A river that spilled."--great line.

I know sometimes less is better but you left me wanting more. I wish you could expand a little..maybe one more stanza. That's just me being greedy of course!

A slice of reading heaven. Thanks for the read.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your review Pandora

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Beautifully written....heartfelt pain....stunning expression in such few words....nice ink.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much for your kind words Jane

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Oh Andrew.. This was so painful, yet so beautiful..
I really like the last line. I have an obsession with blue eyes..

Great write, Andrew. Just fabulous!

[andrew mitchell]

Sorry Nikki For being late but many belated thank yous

[Gee]

The nail well and truly hit on the head,the ball out of the park.Really good write Andrew

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Gee

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I like how you used several metaphors to describe the tears. I can say, you are definitely finding your own voice and establishing your style! It is beautiful to see it happen.

[andrew mitchell]

Many belated thank you's MS

[sereenaoutloud]

short sweet, beautiful and sad! I loved this, a great write AM. Going to my library for favs!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wow... a very short, but nevertheless a great piece of your work. The change of feelings was fast. I like this one. :)

[andrew mitchell]

many belated thank you's Danny

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[Valentine]

Short but you hit the point on the head this time. Nice write. Valentine