ON DISPLAY

She walks down the street

Wind blows her blonde hair

In high heels, short skirt

How the men stared.

Wolf whistles were a plenty

As she tosses her blonde hair

She knows she's being noticed

As she walks the street with flair.

With ample breasts, cupped cheeks

Legs that go afar,

Your undivided attention 

Now focused on the star.

Aimed to tease

To those that stare

As she walks the street with flair

She's loving all the attention

Tossing back her blonde hair.

She pulls all the ropes

Just puppets on a string

She's got you in her sights

 Boys!.....As her claws dig in.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Terrific write! In this piece you described 2 types of people I don't
appreciate at all, the no manners having whistling fools and the no class
having lady teasing the staring morons! This piece is written great, and the
imagery is crystal clear, maybe I'm getting up tight in my old age or maybe
it's cause I have 2 lovely daughters and that stuff ruffles
my feathers:( Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[alf]

hi Andrew. How accurate you description is of a few girls I have noticed flaunting themselves. Though they are in the minority, they expect exactly the treatment you have given them. I feel sorry for the girls who suffer because of the few. brilliantly written and a joy to read, alf

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Nice description of the primitive and seductive nature of man and woman. This reminded me of "Maneater" by Hall & Oates - "Oh-oh here she comes, watch out boys she'll chew you up." Great write.

[~]

This made me smile. It is true that whistles can be annoying but yet, they do smother the ego a bit :) which you described really well. Well done :)

[sereenaoutloud]

Another great write! I agree with James nothing worse than those whistling wolves, great imagery you convey.