EVERYONE'S TALKING ABOUT........

There was a time

When life was fun.

The days seemed longer

When they were young.

But now they're older

Their days seem short.

Their chores are longer,

More time is sought

To start their hobbies

They haven't begun

While all their faculties

Are still number one.

A race against time

To reach their goals

While they're in their prime

Before life dissolves.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Wow! What great cadence as you read. What great word choices to be read. What great flow down the lines. What great adherence to syllable count. All those things and more are why I think is one of the greatest poems you have written since I've been on site. You have raised you own bar here, now go for it!!! LUUUUUV this, alf

[Valentine]

It isn't just hobbies that one wants to get done. All of the dreams of youth while growing into adulthood. Life is so short, if we do not attempt to at least try doing those things, one day we will be too old and feeble to even dream or try. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

We learn too late.
"A race against time
To reach their goals
While they're in their prime
Before life dissolves."
Time is the most valuable assets. We learn too late. Don't waste time on useless things. Find the tings we want to do and enjoy them. Good logic in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[WanderAsia]

I enjoyed that and could relate to it. Nice build up and thank you for bringing it to a perfect end.

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write! I agree with this message firmly! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!