THE AWAKENING

Just for the record , no its not about me lol

My first love was not so fun

Stumbling, fumbling, looking dumb.

An important step for one so young

Like a boy to a cowboy and here's your gun:

Survival of the strongest has just begun.

Eye to eye the connections met

And I'm thinking she's heaven-sent;

Slender, seductive, the rhythm of a cat!

So of course I'm wondering...Can I match that!

Like a strolling minstrel falling over my toes

I was charming her, worshipping her. What a show!

Later she's uncovered, naked, open to view

While I'm shocked, trembling, trying to be cool.

So many pressures I wanted to be the best

And I didn't want to say " I've just left the nest."

For now my amorous feelings are out of control

While she's so glamorous head to toe

Advice from my friends, too embarrassed to ask;

Wish i did my homework. Could be a false start.

For just my luck I met an unforgiving mind

While I'm more the sensitive kind;

Her courtship signals quickly withdrew

At my fumbling manoeuvres, I just knew.

On with her clothes, her passion lost;

My confidence shattered. What a loss!

Rejected badly, I wanted to cry:

The pain so bad I wanted to die.

Then one day under hormonal control

Those amorous feelings are out on patrol

What's happening to my body? I like to know

To be thrown right back into the throe,

And I'm thinking...... Not to have another go! 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Old days we didn't have the internet. Porn was hard to find. Playboy showed little. Was a wild adventure the first time. I liked the thoughts and story in the poem. Lovemaking is a learned skill. We do get better. Most of us will never give up of give in. Woman made us wild and mad men for the kiss and touch of the pretty lady. Thank you for sharing the fun poem to read.
Coyote