THAT FIRST EMBRACE

I will always remember my first embrace,

Gently brushing lips so fine,

Sending tingles down my spine

Like soaring birds our lips just glide;

A soft cushion touch with pressure applied!

Catching my breath between deep sighs

While gazing into her incredible eyes;

No concept of time, not even the sun,

Lips combined, we were united as one.

Immersed in passion I never dreamed;

Those soft red lips, the best I've seen.

A moment of splendour so divine;

Was this love? Was i losing my mind?

Soothing, massaging, all my thoughts

That kiss of hers that couldn't be bought.

Now fragments in time, but not forgotten

Of those first kisses that had me besotted.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Love it. "no concept of time, not even the sun. lips combined, we were untied as one" Beautiful explanation of a powerful kiss. another great write!

[Cool Girl]

Omg!! I loved this so much! You did a remarkable job with rhyming :)