BEHIND CLOSED DOORS

So strange to be able to see

When all eyes are closed

To see dazzling images

Of dreams which stand alone.

And looking within closed doors

Where outsiders cannot see

And worlds become one

Behind a wall built by me.

So strange to be able to see

When all eyes are closed

like having a second life

On my return from the outside world.

Reviews

[Lavender Soya]

This one's very well-penned. It's short but potent. Great flow and nice choice of words. Keep writing! :-)

[success]

i really like this poem. a very remarkable piece. well done