A JOURNEY ON TRACK

You're on a train

Your journey unknown

And the tracks have been laid

So your wisdom will grow.

And along the way

There will be stops

And your plans will change

If you decide to get off.

But to stay on track

Your hopes will be reached

Your future is assured;

The unknown will be breached.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe we decide our life and journey. One wrong turn or we decide a different path. Our life will change. I enjoyed the poetry.You left the reader with something to think about. Thank you Andrew for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much for your time and review Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Andrew.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A more sober presentation with a hopeful message in an apt metaphor Andrew.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you John, All aboard for Mayfair!:)

[B]

The journey of life
A perfect depiction of what we face on that journey ?

A very thoughtful piece of human fragility along the way

[andrew mitchell]

Too true! Next Stop!

[B]

Lol
We are officially buddies lol

[nazia]

This is what we call life. a perfect description of what goes on. Many changes, many paths or stops which are unknown to us are revealed. Nice write :)

[GreenEyedPoet]

Love the flow of this piece and it has a great message. :)

[alf]

Hi Andrew. You are so nearing a new level of writing in the past week. Your messages are clear and succinct, your stanza are slowly gaining great meter and the cadence in reading is truly gaining great flow. Love what you are doing, alf

[Jamestown]

Nice flowing write and great message, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!